2. The feedback that I received from my last pitch was great. It became clear to me that I was not providing enough detail on how I was going to implement my solution. Therefore, I tried to be very detailed. The feedback that surprised me was that I was not emotional enough. I tried to be a little more emotional and captivating in this one. I received no silly feedback, everything seemed accurate.
3. I tried to be more emotional and I tried to go into more detail. I hopefully accomplished those goals.
Hi Hunter,
ReplyDeleteIn your elevator pitch I see that you have included much more detail for the business. However, the angle that you position make it hard to see your face from the glare, and facial emotion can be important sometimes in convincing someone to purchase a item. In my elevator pitch, I commonly lack confidence in convincing one for the business. Here is the link to my elevator pitch check it out if you have time. http://jzent3003.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-3.html
Cool, Hunter. I love your idea. I think this would be very popular in the Gainesville area. I would say next time to have the camera in a different angle, so you aren't having to be looking down at it. Also, you're going to want to dress up nicer. Your appearance can go a long way. I like that you want to include everyone and not just Greek life. Keep working on it and figuring out how you're going to make it different from other promotional companies, but I think you're on the right track with it! Thanks for sharing!
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